Monday, January 28, 2008

Snow Day saved my behind

me: yes!!! saved by the weather!
school is cancellledeldeldeldle!!!!!
Sent at 9:47 PM on Monday
Gail: snow day!
i see saved by the snow
you are a stinker, a lucky one!
me: lol
yeah, no kidding
Gail: and all your work doesnt have to be perfect
me: sigh
Gail: 5 minute fix
me: but I want it at least to look like a 1-week average paper from a Junior
Sent at 9:48 PM on Monday
me: I mean, if it was just cramming thoughts on paper in an hour-long essay test, that I can do if I don't need to recall any information, like Mr. Mitzack's physic class essay tests
but this is like, limit it to 3 pages, and do research and quote people!
and they give us so much material to work with I just seem to barely get all my thoughts on paper in a way I can understand them
I bet you can edit them with me and make them better
Gail: hmm maybe do your own thoguhts first, like mitsak, then go back and interject your research to justifly and back up your thoughts?
me: yup, that's what I've been doing
but I'm just so full of thoughts
I have to limit them when I start writing
or cut them out later
but just writing them down takes so much of my brain's energy
it's like, write 3 pages, wait a day, add reasearch, wait a day, edit it, wait a day, then final edit it with feedback
but this time it was like 42 pages of reading before the writing phase
Gail: maybe an outline to help limit or channel your houghts? and conserve your energy?
me: and my ideas, I have to write them down as soon as I think them or I forget
that's why I send you so much one-line emails
I do write an outline
and I do focus on the essay questions the prof writes

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